I like how John and Natasha are kind of like a gender-flipped Mulder and Scully. I love that you seem to be keeping their relationship platonic, too. I haven’t really explored Desiderata Valley, but I’ve always viewed John and Natasha as being best friends who like to irritate each other moreso than potential romantic partners.
I’m probably just not looking hard enough, but this is the first time I’ve ever seen anyone actually explore Erin’s “psychic” persona, so I’m excited. I can’t wait to see her become more involved with Natasha and John.
I love the story so far. Chapter 4 sounds like it’s going to be amazing, I love when the various neighborhoods mingle.
Chapter 3, one of my favorites! Hope you all enjoy. 🙂
There were very few things Natasha would stop halfway through painting to see. A freshly made grilled cheese or John doing something stupid made that list, and seeing one of her old friends from Sim State was another one.
“Erin, you’re here!”
“Yup! Thank you so much for inviting me down.” Erin giggled. “I needed a break from the other girls. Sometimes it’s too much living in that house!”
“Well feel free to make yourself at home. Are you hungry? I could make you a grilled cheese.”
“Forget that Nat, I want to meet John! Didn’t you say he’s like a secret agent or something like that?” Erin smiled, blushing a bit. She had always had a thing for mysterious men.
“Uh, well, something like that.” Natasha mumbled. She already knew John was going to be mad at her for…
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